I love it. Love the theme, and the way you've etched the scene depicting love. "Shy, Surreal The silent sounds" Also, the way you have written about the moment when everything ceased to let love survive and make it eternal. Although the theme isn't very new, the way you've written about it is certainly very innovative :) Only love survived... (A round of applause for Kamna!)
I love it. Love the theme, and the way you've etched the scene depicting love. "Shy, Surreal The silent sounds"
ReplyDeleteAlso, the way you have written about the moment when everything ceased to let love survive and make it eternal.
Although the theme isn't very new, the way you've written about it is certainly very innovative :)
Only love survived...
(A round of applause for Kamna!)
Thank you! Thank you! My personal favourite lines worth a notice are:
ReplyDeleteSoured shadows (of the lovers)
Teared the tacit trance
And ceased to hear-the sounds of bare feet…
Read them again! :P
:-) AWESOME blog Kamna.
ReplyDeleteKeep it up!!!!!!
n keep me informed of your updates n new additions. :-) ;-*
Thanks Shreya! You'll be kept informed for sure :)
ReplyDeleteVery nicely written.. But can I ask y did u think of lemon tree ? y not something like apple tree? :)
ReplyDeleteApple tree can't make history again. Adam and Eve made it famous. I'll make Lemon tree famous. :P
ReplyDelete:)..though Iam not great at understanding some of your expressions...still...its has got a chilling feel to it. VIBRANT is the word for it! :)
ReplyDeletejst read it agn after long.... n its BEAUTIFUL i wud say...!! u really deserve an applause Kamna..!!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm honoured! :)
ReplyDelete"All is fine
ReplyDeleteUntil the kind God decided
To let the moment stay eternal…"
"That which is left
Is the Lemon Tree
Hath saved the Lovers from misery…"
I loved the whole of it.. Just cant stop reading them again and again... :)